Weekly Photo Challenge: Free Spirit


A little bird sits along the shore line,
Watching the many two legged creatures,
Frolicking across the sand,
Running up and down.
Into the water they go.
As quick as they run in,
They run back out.
On a hot summers day,
The water is still briskly cool.
Quiet little bird,
Sits across the shore line.
Watching the days go by.
A soaring spirit,
Free as can be.



11 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Margaret Griffin
    Sep 08, 2012 @ 12:35:14

    Valeen, This is an engaging poem observing life from another’s perspective. I wonder how much a seagull observes me as I observe it.


  2. poetryblogofmine
    Sep 08, 2012 @ 14:34:55

    Hey i nominate you for the Sun shine award, love you.


  3. artzent
    Sep 10, 2012 @ 16:25:45

    Lovely entry! Looks like home to me . I am from South Florida and miss the beach so much. Your poem describes it beautifully! Thank you for the visit giving me a chance to know you.


  4. poetryblogofmine
    Oct 21, 2012 @ 05:29:32

    Reblogged this on poetryblogofmine and commented:
    Great piece


  5. Yoshiko
    Oct 21, 2012 @ 05:48:57

    So refreshing when I imagine it.
    And thank you for liking my poem. 🙂


  6. dexter waweru
    Oct 21, 2012 @ 09:40:27

    I like it.


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